Evaeva

Really nice! just a few lines I thought could maybe be improved though on the whole you used the structure well. the rhymes weren't obstructing which is very promising! Here ...

heya! I really like this poem. I read your first draft of it (or whichever the other one was) but I definitely think this is better. There is more meaning ...

yay! I have had some criticism for using religion and references to god in some of my poems but im glad that other people do it too. Also, I really ...

Its very short which makes it very refreshing from some of the other poetry i have read recently. I like it. It feels like one of those little bites of ...

wow! It was so real! I really felt in that piece that the person speaking was experiencing it all and that she had a past, and a future to come, ...

I know exactly what you mean and you manage to describe it in ways i never would have imagined. I think it's really good! It runs smoothly, despite the different ...

you must be musical. I live music and i can tell that you know how it feels to be that completely absorbed in the rhythm and harmony. You capture it ...

Hey! That was interesting, a very new idea, I've never even thought about that before. I know what you mean about not being sure if it's poetry or not. I ...

I didn't understand what it was about but I still really liked it! It had good description and I felt it flowed well. The meaning could be clearer but I ...

I liked it. ALOT. There is so much atmosphere, I feel like I'm there. And I can relate to it. I know that sounds weird but I often just want ...

I really liked this, though I do have a few small corrections/criticisms/whatever you want to call them. They aren't anything to do you with you writing really, just things you ...