EvaR14

Hi, thanks for writing this! I think you have a good grasp of the premise of the story, which is a good start for writing anything. I suggest writing a ...

This poem's really good. Even though there's no clear rhyme scheme/pattern (at least that I could find) the poem doesn't come across to me as disorganised - well done! These ...

It's not mine, but there's an interesting book on wattpad called Dream Catcher written by SheHopes. It's a series of three (Dream Catcher, Dreamscape and Dream Hunter). I've only read ...

I love the way this was formatted and written. It sounds quite like a prophecy you night read in an old myth or story. The idea of judgement was shown ...

I love the descriptions in this poem, as well as the rhythm. It's very powerful at invoking the feeling of hatred it describes. I especially like the lines "hatred is ...

I liked this poem, it was simply structured in a way that made the message clear. There are a few grammar mistakes, but I assume mostly typos (I think it ...

I loved this story, it captured the emotions and reactions we have to heartbreak. I like how, throughout the story, you compare different characters/moments to different parts of nature. "my ...

I love this poem - it is great at expressing emotions. The lowercase letters and lack of punctuation make it seem more genuine and real. I love how the poem ...

I love this. The repetition of "My body is not poetry" really stands out. I know this is old, but this is one of my favourite things I've read here ...

This is heartbreakingly beautiful. I like how, as the poem progresses, the problems the friend faces grow more serious. In the first section, it is casual, brought up while eating ...