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You're review was very helpful. I thought the formatting looked a little "Eh", and now that I've fixed it up it looks much better! And it's hard to offend me ...

I use the "....." to signify a scene change, as well as a change in time and point of view.

Hmm...I should certainly try and clear that up! Thank you for pointing it out!

Oh, wow...thank you! And yes, Runis dies in the square. and she did become Queen of Wolves when she entered the woods, as implied in the dialogue between her and ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'm planning to do some re-writes of this chapter to fix the pace a little. And, yeah, Camile doesn't seem to pay too much attention to Carden...I ...

I had no idea I wasn't staying true to his character! Thank you for pointing that out! Tell me what threw you off about it and I'll make changes. (Would ...

I never noticed before that all the characters so far have names that start with C. Really now since Carden's died it's only Camile and Cirus who have names with ...

Thank you for the review! appreciated on high levels! When I proofread this It was like, 12:00 at night and I was falling asleep in my chair so it doesn't ...

no problem. I currently need reviews on Champions (There I go again...) so if you want to check that out, it would be highly appreciated.

Surprisingly, Kalihr I plan to develop into more of an anti-hero. The plan is for the Big Bad to sneak attack the heroes basically, and he's a scary guy, so ...

Hi cg26! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I hope you find it as fantastic as I do! I'm TheFantasy14. And now for my review. This story has potential, and it ...

Cal is soooooo fun to write, too! And he only gets better!

Thanks for the review! I know I didn't go into much detail about the Guild and what's going on here, but This was more to get the characters there so ...

Come along, Odyssyus! The game's afoot!

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