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Re: I'd be a unicorn
I actually love this poem. It's very dreamlike and gives off a very mystical tone with its imagery and word choice which is definitely right up my alley. It was ...
May 27, 2021 -
Re: The Hunter, Story 1
This was a really interesting story. I like the whole concept of a wandering super-powered detective. Really cool! I'm not really good with critiques or pointers and I don't really ...
May 27, 2021 -
Re: Chapter I, Introducing Aiden
I'm intrigued! I mean of course the idea of a 13 year old girl running a massive criminal organization is more than a little ridiculous but I can definitely see ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Girlish
I really like this. I am also going to assume this has something to do with identifying as transgender. As a non-binary individual myself this really speaks to me because ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts -1-
Hello! :D Welcome to YWS! Though, I have to tell you I don't have much business welcoming you considering I just got here myself. However, welcome all the same! ^_^ ...
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: The Legless Angel
First review ever so I hope you give me a little slack with this one. Because of the horror tag I was expecting it to be creepy, but I wasn't ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: An uncertain feeling
I really like the message you convey here. It's very relatable considering everyone on this site is a writer. As writers, I think we all desire a kind intellectual stimulation. ...
Aug 23, 2014