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Re: Removed
Thanks fer the suggestions aye I have no say means in the world my words are worth nothing and I have no say in anything, a phrase Thanks again =)
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Burning Thoughts
There is form, there is a structure, quite maintained. There is essence. Metaphors Keep writing. It will get better and better and better Don't let anyone define your boundaries! Love
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: My Inbetween
Hey, a very beautiful piece And it would be even better if you, next time, form a structure. Like a fixed number of lines in a stanza. It is very ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Removed
That is the quality of Sijo, it must have a sing song quality. Every three lines make a separate Sijo, aye It is not that good, because the structure gets ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Whiterose Thanks for stopping by. =) =) Phoenix Thanks friend, I am so hurt
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Ok. Thank you very much, I was jerked quite a hundred times myself reading a review longer than my post itself Number one: I did say do not dissect my ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Thanks but I'd rather continue with my own style, I do understand Simple English, Believe me =P I do not mean to sound harsh or rude I appreciate it all!!! ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Ok well Thanks for the review but I would answer stuff back =) Immature word was used on purpose. He was not a a painter he was just someone *immature* ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Singularity
I always go for form, structure and composition of course the matter because that is what makes one a writer a poet or anything whatsoever Great read.And I agree.. sad ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Really. I am glad. I was feeling alien in here. All the same, reviews really help I explain again that the description was avoided ON PURPOSE. I am glad, again, ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Answers to everything. Clearly, you have never gone through this. Because as I said in the description, for the tired and defeated. When one is tired in the long run, ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Actually, the story is more understood by the corresponding pictures (which I post on my blog) and I am not aware, of how, to post them here. As for her ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Thank you really very much. So so appreciated. New here so I am not aware how to respond individually 1- Thank you for loving my story. I like writing small ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: 5 Haiku
Well a friend of mine is so into Haiku. Well. Lovely. I love how every culture has it's distinct form of poetry. Awesome work
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Removed
No.'49' I indeed am glad at your perception about my poem Sometimes many of us live in that ward No. 49... Thank you again and I will be looking forward ...
Aug 30, 2011
