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Hey Ash. Haha I feel spoiled. All the others have yet to see more chapters of this, but I already have! (Teehee) ~Shameless Advertising~ Just you wait, fellow readers! It ...

Bittersweet, Thanks for the critique - as always all comments are greatly appreciated. However, I do want this to be a stand-alone? Can it not be a stand-alone? Or, differently, ...

GryphonFledgling, Hotel, hotel… Why, you asked, and I’d reply if I knew, really. But I don’t, and after a long, uncomfortable silence, let’s change the subject, okay? But yes, I ...

Well, yes, they aren’t too good, but for one-time reads they can do. The fact that I will buy the third book doesn’t necessarily mean that I like the series, ...

Angel - Yes, long it is, but I figured I don’t want to split it, and so I posted the whole thing. As to the intro - I wanted to ...

Katharsis - I think I shall start to crit myself, actually. XD ‘No - know’. Anyway, I suppose that not every scene has to be cried over, yes?.. Well, onward ...

I love you, too :)

Thewonderfulworldofnight, I love you. Having said that, I would like to repeat it: I love. You have just answered one of my worries concerning this piece: It has almost no ...

Okay, [major-like] edits made: -> Points from Twit’s, Stevie’s and Alleycat’s crits taken, at least most of them. Particularly the seriously cliché black-clad protagonist (or antagonist, I real

Firstly and standart-ly, as always I would like to thank my critters. J I know that this story was written quite a while ago, and that I already have a ...

Squallz, Again, I’ll to start out by thanking you for the review. Next, I would like to say that after reading it I couldn’t quite think of a coherent reply ...

Alainna, Thanks (and that goes again to everyone who read/critted and read/without critting) for the feedback. It's rather thrilling to find someone who actually is for the Voice as it ...

... The second stanza? But the bathroom part is important! *Whimpers* Also, I am starting to think that I am a bit over-enthusiastic with the exclamation marks. Anyway, again thanks ...

One more thing: Interesting titles catch a reader's eye, and vague 'chapter one' cut about half of the number of people that could have read the story. :) So, give ...

Sunny, First of all, thank you very much for your crit. Having the standard (but very from the heart!) part said, I realize what you’re saying about some of the ...