Esmé

Oooh, definitely very creepy. Scary. But awesome. I guess I don’t really have anything that constructive to say - Adam already noticed the only other thing that I did (the ...

I do not really critique poetry, but the I do read it sometimes, and so I thought that I would actually say when I liked it. So, there you go, ...

Ryter, This is… weird. O_o But in the positive sense of the word, of course. Especially the first part. It’s a response? A written response? If so, then turn it ...

Last of the posted parts, eh? And now I’m going to have to wait for the next installments, like the rest? :S *Is not happy, not happy at all* Quote: ...

Finally back, yes? Apparently, its impossible to keep away. I have already said that while critting the last piece I just had to take a sneak-peak at what happens in ...

Back : ) So this is part two, eh? Well, onward, onward, then! Quote: If you stop struggling then neither of us will die. ‘Struggling‘, again? ‘Struggling’ is already above. ...

Fantasyartist, Here is the crit I owe you. As always with my reviews, first comes the line-by-line crit, and the impressions, likes/dislikes. I see that you already have quite a ...

Hello, As I said, you have caught my undivided attention when it comes to this story. *Grumbles, but only a bit* And yes, sadly enough, it is a bit short. ...

Hello, First of all, I’ll admit to not reading the first part of the chapter. *Cringes* Secondly, as always, first comes the line-by-line crit, and then impressions, etc. Quote: She ...

Hello, I distinctively remember Cra-yon Lay-onds posted on YWS, but I never did get round to critting it : ) So I’ll do this, ok? (Yes, as if you can ...

Grrr. Don’t say that. I’m talking about the ‘horrendous’ part. Oh, but lol, I see I turned into one of your faithful, puppy-like critters? Jeez, I really have to study, ...

Ooh, so I guess I’m taking back the rant about ‘negatives’, yes? Lol. I think that all future rants like that will be saved until I get to part 12, ...

[pre]Yay, part 7! Have I already said how happy I am that I don’t have to wait for you to write, review, and then finally post the next installment on ...

[pre]Well, I have some time on my hands. And where am I? Lol. Of course, reading Lyla. Quote: He was very friendly in his own way, as long as you ...

Hello, It was the title that caught my attention - I’m a sucker for titles and cover art, lol. Anyway, I’ll do a line-by-line crit first, and leave the more ...