Esmé

Ashley, So I couldn’t help myself, I admit. I came rushing to the next part as soon I saw it was up, despite the fact that I should get to ...

Rei, Hello! (is hiding a sharp, sharp knife behind her back, and is smiling happily). Soon, you shall be able to delight in my rambles, my thoughts concerning the mentioned ...

Bcain, I’m afraid that I can’t offer you very little constructive comments - before, though, I just echo the rest, and add my own paeans, here are some little nitpicks: ...

BigBadBear, Hey there. Esme comes bearing that crit. Quote: I never really thought about it much back then. Comma before “back”. Quote: ‘Cause I was a big boy. I don’t ...

Okay, no intro, let’s just consider this a continuation of the last critique. Quote: I was positive, as I turned the key in the lock that my boyfriend would be ...

Alainna, I actually did read this earlier, and had half the crit typed up, but then it just disappeared somewhere in the folder. Sowwie. Quote: “No she’s not. Is it ...

Well, I edited the first chapters. All comments and/or impressions are included in the attachments, so you can just go on and read that instead of this. Cheers! Or no. ...

thebadthing, Admittedly, I read this a good while ago, and meant to write a critique then,, but somehow it didn’t turn out. But I’m here now, and it’s better late ...

Leahweird, Witches and their familiars, aye? Well, we’ll see what you’ve got in store for me… :) Quote: Discovering what she might look like if her curls weren’t so matted, ...

Autumn, Hello. I’m Esme (obviously, but, ah, well), and today I shall be the one critiquing your piece. As usual with my reviews, you’ll get a line-by-line one first, and ...

MacDanny, Hello, my name is Esme, and I think I’ll be your first critter, at least as far this piece is concerned. I’ll start out with a line-by-line critique, and ...

KJ, So I finally got to critting something of yours, aye? I’ll probably take a look at “Needles and Roses” later on, but I opened this first, and as it ...

day tripper, I actually read this before the edits were made, but somehow never got around to critiquing it. Well, no time like the present to change that, aye? Quote: ...

ringettegirl, Hello, my name’s Esme, and today I shall be one of your story’s cirtters. As always with my critiques, you’ll get a line-by-line one first, and any impressions that ...

Bittersweet, Welcome to YWS, aye? T’is a most wonderful site, but very addictive. But, onward with your critique! Quote: His name was Julius Alexander Morfit, and his name was not ...