EscapeToNeverland

Okay first off thankyou for reviewing my piece, Odyssey. Everything you have said is very true. Though there is one thing everyone needs to stop saying that I need to ...

Argh it didnt work, I'm going to have to re-rewrite it over again.

See makes sense as to why I asked you to review it. Okay with the paragraph thing I actually did do it but when I put it into the submit ...

Okay now I looked back on it and I%u2019m not sure how I didn%u2019t notice it before. I write all my chapters and what not on a word document on ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my piece! I did have it in paragraphs and all but it didnt come through I'm about to fix it up. But really thankyou! ...

Thank you so very much. This has been very helpful and I shall change things. As for the thoughts part I believe you to be correct. Though I do remember ...

Okay I’m probably going to post a side note at the end of every chapter. Sometimes It’ll be explaining something that I didn’t put in the chapter, and doesn’t really ...

you are very welcome

it was my pleasure to review your poem, it really is beautiful :o

I like the poem and if it's about a real person, then they're lucky..... I like how it's written, and the way you kept it simple but yet elegent. Very ...

Wow!!!!!! I love the thunder and that now gives a whole new meaning

Wow it's short but meaningful, sometimes all you need is something short like this to put things in perspective ~Neverland

sure thing Patrick. Thanks!!!! :D

I'm sure it's amazing. But it cant see it. Maybe try and re-post, maybe?

it's beautiful. i loved it so much.