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Re: Of Science Fair Projects and Names
Hey AdoxagraphyAngelus! Error404 here and ready to review! :D Before I begin rambling reviewing, let me I thought this short story was super cute and enjoyed it thoroughly. It had ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: The History of Windriders
Hey there, ZaddieCaso. Error404 here! :) Sorry if this sounds a tad brief, but I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this extract; simply because I loved it from ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Smoke
Hey there, Waywardbird! Error404, here! I'm doing this review just before school, so sorry if I sound really brief or picky! I'll edit this post later. :) I enjoyed this ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Place to Belong part 1
Hey there, Error404 here and ready to review! :D Brace yourself for Grammar Nazi attack! Haha, just kidding! ;) Personally, I not a fan of the Twilight saga but I ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Under the Floor-boards
Well... that was... creepy. O__O Very dark and sinister; I like it. In fact, it's probably one of the creepiest poems I've read on YWS so far. The text flows ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Arya's light or Elvish light
Kvetha Fricai! (Greetings, friend!) Its Error404 here, ready to review. :) First of all, you deserve a high-five! I'm glad to see some Eragon fan fiction on YWS being a ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Foot prints in the snow
Hey there, MaskedPoet. Error404 here and ready to review! I really enjoyed reading this piece of yours! :D It's the sort of poem that makes you pause for a minute ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The blood-stained floors
Hey there, Redleaf! Error404 here to review your work. :) Haha, brace yourself for Grammar Nazi assault! Nah, I have nothing evil to say... today. ;) Might I say that ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Things I Hate
Ah, I love sweet and simple poems like these. They're really cute and always fun to read... definitely my kind of poem! :D On the other hand, this has a ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
Oh, how the times are changing, my friend. What game you must have to post this on a female dominant site. Let's skip this part and get to the reviewing, ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: White Ravens
Hey GoaGreena, Error404 here! :D Oh, I quite liked it... loved it, actually! It was written beautifully from start to finish and I can't think of anything more to add ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Warmed Over
I appluad you, kind sir!!!
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Nightmares.
Hey Lunasol21, Error404 here! :D I loved the language and tone used in this poem. When I first starting reading I felt a sense of calmness and then WHAM! It's ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: My Guardian Angel
Hey there! I agree with PinkViper , it is beautifully written. Welldone, I hope you got an "A" for that assignment! :D - Error404
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: uuhhhh
Wow! I really liked it, my eyes didn't move off the text once! I was really gripped and wanted to hear more but alas, it ended too suddenly! I guess ...
Dec 13, 2010
