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Thank you so much @Sree !! Oh yes ... That's a typo there ... Have corrected it ...

Thank you so much, Katnes !! I will consider your suggestions...

Thank you so much the review @Sree ! I loved your review. Superb review it was.

Thanks for the review !! I will definitely consider your advice here... To read the poem aloud a few times... I willl edit the things once I get time... Thank ...

Thank you so much for your review ! Yeah ... I think it should be were tightly pinned... that's better. Actually the feels in the first line was used for ...

The haiku concept is a little new to me ... But I still want to say that what you have written is awesome.

Thank you for the review !! Yeah... It is rated 18 already ...

Thank you so much for the review !! You can see the short story, till then ... You may go through some of my old works ... Thank you so ...

Actually I wanted to make it short. And yes you are correct, it was all the culture in the village, they did not accept their daughter once she was married. ...

Thank you so much for the review !!!

Thank you so much for the review !!

Thank you so much for the review !!

Thank you so much for the review !!

Thank you so much for the review !!

Thank you so much for the review !!