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Re: Death's Reign: Chapter XI
Hey there Alice!! Eros here to review again!! I liked this chapter also. Though there are some nit-picky things... “Oh to hell with social conduct!” Emmeline’s voice rose as so ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown III
Heya again! This chapter kept the mystery of his hiding. The Queen had a hard time struggling to stop thinking of him. Everyting is described gradually, and nicely. Some nit-picky ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown II
Heya!! Eros again for a review!! This one was again, really amazing. I liked how you have presented everything. I liked the unique idea of telling the past in-between-the present, ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown I
Heya GreatKing, AutoPilot, and FandomsNmusic!! This Eros here to review this joint work by you all!! I liked the title. It was indeed catchy and captivating. I liked the theme ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Show Me
Heya, Keepwriting!! Eros here to review your wonderful poetry! First thing which comes, is the title. The title is catchy, "Show me". It is related with the poem. Everything is ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: a glimpse that took my heart away...... <3 <3
Heya Nishta!!! Eros here to review your wonderful poem! Let us begin with the title. The title is attractive and catchy. It is related with poem too. Then comes the ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: I Think I Love You
Heya, sunset!! This is Eros here to review your sweet poem! This was a romantic poem full of innocense. I loved this piece. I appreciate that you have used rhyming ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter X
Hi there Alice!! I am back to write you a review! xD Firstly some nit- picky things: The maid shook her head, “Later that night when everyone went to be ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 3)
Ohhhh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!noooooooooo!!noooo!!!! NEVER NEVER!!! TribeofArt!!! NooooOOO!!! What will happen to the love which is just starting to take birth between Ryan and Val!!!!
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter IX
Hi there Alice!! Eros is back! The only thing is the title---I think it should be IX and not XI. Rest everything is superb. I like how the story is ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter VIII
Heya Alice!! Eros is back to review this chapter! Hmm, so the supper was too different from the meals they gave Emma at the asylum. This is described beautifully here. ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: I Told Her I Loved Her on the Fourth of July
Heya EmmVeePi!! This is Eros here to review your work!! This work was a great piece. I loved it. I appreciate that you have used a rhyme scheme without breaking ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: Silky Ink
Hey Joe! This is Eros here again!! When I read "A Golden Trophy" I saw the other works at the side, and I thought of reading this too! This is ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: A Golden Trophy
Hey Joelsweet!! This is Eros here to review another beautiful piece of yours!! I loved reading " A Golden Trophy". It was written beautiully. I liked the title. I think ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter VI
Wow!! Alice, This was again sooooo beautifully written. I loved the Chapter 5 and 6 too! I have read all the chapters till now, and I loved all of them. ...
Apr 15, 2016
