ErinYount

Hey! Thank you for all the appreciation Rachel. The point about "curled"... noted. Thanks, again.

Hey. Hi. Thanks for the appreciation. Almost everything you pointed out, except for the two probable-rephrasals, was a typo. I guess I didnt re-read it properly enough. will work on ...

Thank you. :)

Noted. Thank you. :)

By "tacky" I mean something that makes you feel like your tongue is stuck somewhere if you read it aloud. Something that is interrupting the flow of the read. Maybe ...

Thank you.

Hi. First of all, thanks for stopping by. I'd say that the clumsiness of the piece is intentional. It is supposed to represent the clumsiness of the thoughts, in a ...

Hi Pan, I'll talk about your pointers in the order you pointed them out to me. The comma was a typo. it was supposed to be a full-stop. The repetition, ...

Hi Rothwise, I liked your piece, but it ended too quickly for me. I mean, until "... regaling of other lives", it felt good, and then I read the next ...

Hi. "How many words could I devote to thee? Yet, none of these words I will speak" This line just took my breath away.

Hi. I like the poem in general. "I fall into the water, and it covers my face. Darkness seems a comfort and feels like an embrace." worked as the best ...

Point taken. Thanks!

Hey hi. First of all, thanks for stopping by. Yes, it is a prologue to something. I think I should've mentioned that in the description. Alas! My bad. The sentence ...

Got'cha. Thanks!

Hi. I'll pay attention to the nitpicks eventually. For the latter part of what you said, I'd just like to say this. The interaction isn't exactly forced, but yes, certainly ...