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ErinYount

ErinYount

  • Art » Realistic, General Re: Sounds And Scars Of War

    Hi. Well I'll be honest in saying that I am not at all the kind of person who has a thing for nationalistic/patriotic poetry. One about war and soldiers fall ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Art » General, General Re: Let it Bleed

    Hi. That was short and sweet. When I initially opened it and saw it was only one paragraph long, I almost hit the close window on my computer, because I ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    Hi. Honestly, I did not understand the age time line, though I get that they are going from super young, to young, to teenage over the years. Other than that, ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sonnet #69

    This one reads with a flow. The stark combination of Shakespeare and modern day world language gives it an individuality. I am a literature student, so even though I am ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: When he knows he isn't coming home

    This one really is amazing. I spent time reading a few of your other pieces, because I wanted to read the best ones, and well the effort was worth it. ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The World Inside

    The ones who can glimpse that world would be the ones who can see through your soul. The piece says it all. It is amazing in the sense that it ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: And I held You

    Not only do these lines bring a sense of nostalgia, but also paint very blissful picture, of happiness in the middle of all the pain and hurt. They sow someone ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Letter Never to Arrive

    Hi, For starters, I quite well understand get what you're feeling because I'm going through something similar. I won't say I get it completely because it is always different for ...

    Dec 5, 2013


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