Erb

I certainly liked your style, it was different from what I'm used to reading. Some of the lines confuse me however. Are you going through the seasons? Because I was ...

Hi its IR. Its a pleasure to review your poem. I hope you find it helpful. Ok. the first thing i saw was the old language. I really made it ...

Yikes,kind of a sick one if you ask me. I have but one question: Have you ever been had a "Lesson in Dying"? It was well written though, looking forward ...

I'm very sure this poem contains a lot of true passion and feeling for your fictional fantasy but I just cannot bear to read another Twilight fanfic or any type ...

This was really interesting. I definetly didn't stray away and think about other things while reading this. I didn't notice any grammatical errors really, maybe one or two. I loved ...

Thanks for the review. However this was written in the first place for people who were involved in my life. I remembered previous activity on this site and decided to ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette :D Wow, this piece made me smile. It's so optimistic - well, the overall concept anyway. I so have days when I think, ...

Hey, Erb. Try reposting this in Other Fiction , instead of other poetry. You'll get more responses that way. :) Oh, and also space your lines out more, double spacing. ...

Hello! :) I enjoyed that little piece! :) I truly felt the core of emotion for your friend, or the character's longing for his friend. I have to say, the ...

" This story has a good atmosphere, and I like how you repeat the phrase "waiting, everlong" throughout the story. It kind of gives it a rhyme. However, the whole ...

Okay..................nice try. Since this is not poetry, I will not review it. it wasnt meant to be poetry. I had no where else to place it which is why its ...

Brilliant, especially that ending

i really enjoyed it! if you dont mind me asking, what was your exact meaning of the word vertigo? Why did you make it the title? What was its significant ...

Short and sweet, it tends to have a "thrown together" feel to it, but i enjoyed it personally. No reason to criticize this piece, on my part.

Your choice of words was very clear, it spoke to me.