Eraqio

This was, to me, not meant to be a poem. It can be seen as an epic, and if thats the case congratulations, plenty of pathos and ethos in here. ...

I see it as something relating to God. Which is ... probably the point. if it isnt I just assumed and I'm sorry. Anyways. At first it seemed like it ...

Loved the title. The work seemed restrained almost, like each line was searching for the right way to phrase it, then coming out with some monotone delivery that lessens it's ...

The feeling I got from it was one of despair and pessimism, of almost retrospective regret. I like how you went through the senses and cataloged the list of sensation ...

most of this is very abstract and a bit contradicting. you make a few spelling errors here and there and they've been pointed out already. on to my review. it ...

Very well done. Reminds me of a poem...Tea I think... I forgot who wrote it, but it was very personal yet distant and descriptive. I loved this piece, honestly. You ...

Very beautiful. I'm not going to give such a huge, in depth review like my predecessors have but I'll do some justice. The piece was astounding, even in the first ...

There is no bittersweetness to this. Its a sort of semi-serious taunt as far as I can see and its pretty well done. Your touting what you would do, or ...

It went on for a while and towards the middle seemed to drone a bit. It surprised me, it continually re-engaged my interest throughout, with creative images and word usage ...

You seem mainly to be writing about sensation, the look and feel of different things. Story wise...there is none, beyond an in the moment theme your using to keep the ...

The title was very ... pedestrian. I really only entered because, well, it diddnt have many reviews. The content...diddnt really keep me. The questioning nature tried to draw on some ...

I like the flow of it, kept me from having to double back in order to get a clear picture of how it's supposed to sound. the story within the ...

My reviews are very short and more on content than punctuation. Certain parts of this were very descriptive, congratulations from a Lovecraft fan here on that, however your description can ...

hahaha, awesome junebug it was very....simplistically complex. Though the peice was very...very short it still put forth some very thoughtful feel. I loved it. Great Vocabulary in such a small ...

I never go over punctuation and my reviews are short so forgive the curtness of this. For one, I saw rhyme in there, but very awkwardly pieced together rhyme that ...