Eraqio

It was good. Thats what I can say of it without going too into detail. But since this is a critique, I think I should. It was very Generic, in ...

The Title felt just a bit generic and the poem itself came off as the same. However I re-read it and changed my first impression, the work itself is actually ...

Very beautiful in a morbid kind of way. Got alot of strong visuals with a dark tinge, lot of imagination in the feel you might have been trying to give ...

Sad way for it to end. :/ I liked the piece, very in depth though processing and I liked the continual reference to your own memories of a time of ...

the above review kinda stumped me hah. Overall this seems like itd be very interesting, I'm just wondering how the Leoplouridon is going to fit, and yes I probably spelt ...

sounds like the openings to a punk song. Great composition, I think the lines could have been a bit longer and a few more expressive words could have been used, ...

This work was deeply emotional, as if you diddnt already know that hah. Overall the piece had beautiful imagery concerning the details about the pain and suffering of the male ...

Its very curt, kind of like something you'd expect in a riddle or a hint towards something. It was very intresting to say the least and I enjoyed it, but ...

It was extremely personal. also it kinda followed an A to B then back to A to C back to A to D back to A method. at times it ...

Great use of language. I liked the use of some dialect in the character's speech as well as their thoughts. It was well written to say the least of it. ...

I kept imagining you going through a cluttered city of cardboard boxes. Overall it was pretty well put together, and the last person above me pointed out minor to extreme ...

You lost me after about the first passage. I liked alot of the wording but spelling and usage errors just kind of threw me off. I agree with dragnet about ...

Wow hah. I liked it. The character and narration kept my attention all the way through, mainly how it felt a little mysterious even in it's explanation. the overall flow ...

I got lost about half way through, but I just re-read and caught on hah. It was good in most of it's angles but I feel like it diddnt use ...