Eraqio

This struck me as a typical love lost song. Dont get me wrong it definately plucked at the heart's strings its just that it diddnt really go beyond that message ...

This poem struck me more as an old European hymn to courage or virtue or something like that... I liked its overall message and its composition was good but in ...

I love the kind of disjointed yet orderly feel the whole piece just gave me from start till finish. Very well done!! I'm a fan of breaking from the norm ...

I liked it. Honestly Towards the end it sort of gave me an old english tale feel, which I think you may have been going for. The piece itself was ...

hahahahaha, nipples. Okay, as a poem, this really diddnt strike me as very worthy of poetry form. it seemed to be more of a short story actually, like a rough ...

GAH!!! I am like the biggest length stickler you will ever meet but I just couldnt complain about this one! hahah, it was great, hontestly, like one of the "F*** ...

I just loved it. I got a sort of 'Alice' Feeling with alot of this, very good considering you have to keep my imagination running to keep me from leaving. ...

The disjointed feel really gets me because thats the form I love to use, but this piece just diddnt catch me, especially the messed up spoiler. Besides that however, the ...

hahahah, wow. Just, just great. Beyond me laughing at just being caught off guard by half of it, it is very well put together, its one of those poems that ...

Epic...Just epic hahah. I love random nonsence, the world of literature wouldnt be the awesome thing it is without some chaos every once and a while. This peice lost me ...

Definately go on with it! I love the concept, especially when on the heels of our current President who everyone said was foreign, different and lets not forget Black, because ...

Head spinning hah. I liked the one after the other feel and the deep contemplation the characters gave off as each came up to the edge and so on, very ...

GAH!!! Sorry but I'm a stickler for length, and with a work this good I wish there had been more, alot more. Besides that though, very well done, what is ...

The story was, intresting, to say the least, and with me to catch my intrest already makes you a pretty good writer. Besides that, many passages seemed to be almost ...

Very proper language, I liked that. Usually fanfic works concerning this paticular game come off as bragging spouts or accounts of some battle on live. Very well done language wise, ...