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Re: My Purge
Consumed in shadow the creature of Mordeth stood before the High King of Men, draped in darkness, a black crown sitting upon it's (this should be its, not it's.) head, ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: Gathering Storm
Hey! I love this! You really encorporated the character's feelings and personalities into this piece. Having read (and obsessed) over the Warrior books a couple of years ago, I know ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Glee / Matt & Santana & Puck
heyy!! First of all, kudos for taking the characters of Glee and putting them into your own story! I know Glee well, you really stuck with their personalities!! I would ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: 101 Ways to Die #7 - #8
Hey Leth! It's Bubbles- just wanted to say thanks again for the story! I love dying by lollipop!! Wow, you're actually going to write 101 Ways to Die, 101 times! ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: The Phone Rings
[quote][I call for wisdom To help me get out. Rain down from the Son And help this seed sprout./quote] Wow. Wow. Wow. This is truly inspirational. I love this!! It ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Scavengers (Scene One of Ten)
Ooh!! Capturing!! It really attracts attention because it is an interesting subject. You use the literary tool of suspense very well in this scene. The reader or critiquer is drawn ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: 101 Ways to Die #1
OH TOTES I WOULD LOVE TO DIE IN YOUR STORY!! :thud: I would like to die by choking on a cherry-flavored lollipop. Or have my riding lawnmower flip over on ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: No Money, No Honey
I like it!! It really striked a nerve for me. It shows a little bit of integrity in the male. You wrote him to be proud of what he has, ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: The Laws of Time Chapter 1: Genesis
Woooaaahhh!! Beasty story!! You have amazing word choice! I especially loved your opening sentances- "I strode through the orange grass listening to the familiar sounds of my home planet. Galifrey ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Black Bird
Wow. This is just AMAZING !!! I love it! You have a real talent for writing music!!! Not to mention an amazing knack for word choice!! :D I award you ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Cheating Death chapter one
Ooh, I love it!!! First of all, the title is exquisite. It really hooks the reader before they have even opened the link!! Secondly, you used awesome word choice and ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: The edge of voyages
Hi!! First of all, this was a beautifully written piece! I was a little foggy on the setting. What gender was the character? Other than those questions, (and the other ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Royal Mistake
I really like this!! Other than making the setting a bit more clear, I love it! Love love love it!!!!!!! :mrgreen: :D
Jan 22, 2010