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Hello, this is SweetMoments here to review on review day! This is pretty cool! I like how you effortly rhyme without making it sound forced, which is very hard to ...

Hello, I'm SweetMoments! Like Lav said I like how you repeat the words: blithe, blithe pale, pale etc Its certainly is unique but it might just be my blunt mind, ...

This had heaps of imagery and made you picture everything. My favourite bit was probably the second paragrapth as the first one had just a litte too much imagery there ...

Hello, it’s been a while since I've reviewed your novel and today is review day soooo yeah! First of all I really liked the imagery in this piece that makes ...

Hello, I am SweetMoments and I will review your piece of work today! :) So, I first thought when I looked at this was "It's very short O_o" but that ...

Hi! Sooo I don't have much to say but I love this novel ;) Although I don't see the direction its going after this chapter ends which it might need ...

Hi again XD Razcoon I was just like you except I read part 3 first, aren't we the smartest? Don't much to except this is... AWESOME again you have not ...

Hello! Again I really loved this, no real nitpicks except a friendly threat. Don't you dare give up on this and you better tell the rest of the story of ...

Hello! I JUST noticed I didn't read the start of this *aw shucks* Aren't I smart? So, on to the review I liked this the the other chapter I read ...

Hello! This is really great it held my attention and made me want to read on, it has great imagery and thoughts mixed in. I don't have nitpicks at all ...

Hi! I quite liked this piece but I would of liked it better if it had some more imagery to paint a picture in your mind better, although you did ...

Hello! This is real great the emotion and storyline was easy to understand and powerful, something that people either miss out in one or the other. I don't really have ...

Haha this is great! I love having a break from the emo poems and this great totally opposite in the way you wrote it! I also like how (You may ...

Hello! This is really good! I love the imagery it really paints a picture in your mind, it feels real dreamlike and like you're in the the dream. I don't ...

Hi! So I like this piece and the idea for a Glee fanfic, but I have some nitpicks like: "I wasn't," I said giving an attitude. This just be me ...