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Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 13): Ending it with a Bang
I came on and saw that you commented on my work three times xD Well, I'll keep those action tips in mind! I should start writing little segments to practice ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 13): Ending it with a Bang
Thanks for the review! I don't know about the first-person thing... I've tried it a couple times, but I always scrapped it because it didn't feel right.
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 12): A Wild Encounter
About your Misc. 1... Lucius is poor, but you can't really call his home a bad neighborhood. I've never had a good grasp on this, though. I mean... we can ...
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 10.1): Special: Arianna
BLEH BLEH BLEHHHHHHH (Translates to 'I'm so sorryyyy') Thanks for the review! Yeah, everything is a little darker 'cuz the last novel I was writing was pretty much 100% humor ...
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 10.1): Special: Arianna
Ah, I will finish it. In fact, I'm working on it right now. I kindaaa stalled for LMS and then I ended up having to rush the deadline. Whoooopsss?? Anyways, ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 10.1): Special: Arianna
Yes, it actually meant not to review xD I'm currently finishing it. But thanks anyways, because now I can go ahead and fix some stuff now that you've pointed them ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.10)
Cheesecake Factory ftw :D It doubles as a pretty dang good restaurant (the bread is amazing), so if we have time we can drive there for lunch and buy cheesecake ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 6): Beach Time is Not Necessarily Eventful
Thanks! Yeah, Mik's stutter seems to be a huge problem. I'm trying my best to cut it down as much as possible.
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 10): Found what They Didn't Want to Find
I am grinning so hard right now. I'm glad the description was good! lksjd fplskf szfj; iersipofzdlkedskl dfjdfkxfl;jwesifkd sdfxsdklfj ^ Sorry, but really, your review has made my day :D
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap.9): Suspicions an- Ah Crap, More People?
... Yeah, the puree part is weird ;u; I'm going to go ahead and delete it.
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog
Eheheh, no notes because I couldn't find any problems that I didn't mention before already. I'll make sure to tell you that next time.
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Two - Beware the Watchog
Oh, it's just that as soon as you said Pansear, I thought "goofy monkey!" Heh, stereotypes =3= It would've been amusing to see the uptight Minerva be good friends with ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog
I didn't feel like bringing it up in my own review, but you didn't get rid of the space, Astral. Shieldon's the Pokemon, not Shield on. nitpicksyayyyy?
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 7): Group (Sorta) Bonding at Last
Ah, thank you! I changed that; it was supposed to be "Mikhail didn't seem any shyer".
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap.9): Suspicions an- Ah Crap, More People?
I'm late, but thank you for the review! I'm glad you like the chapter titles ^.^ I like to make weird ones.
Sep 21, 2015