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Oh, I should probably build the setting a bit better. This is a fictional world, so the purple eyes things is just a characteristic of the people of that made-up ...

And maybe also teach him not to be such a racist little bug Christ now that's a description I never knew I needed to hear.

Ouch. Just rereading that sandwich process makes me cringe. I was, uh, really desperate to make that word quota. Procrastination at it's finest. 100% going to replace that with something ...

Yeah, that sums up this chapter pretty well. Guess that's what happens when you don't have a firm plan for the plot and pacing. Thanks for taking time to review ...

Dang. I tried to math. It's twenty-six students, haha. Unfortunately, I am using Word for everything. Since it's spring break, I'll make sure to proofread some of these earlier chapters. ...

Ho boy, there's a lot of Abel-thinking-fun-time in the next few chapters, if I remember correctly. Too lazy to check right now. I'll cut it down in this week's, though.

Nice to see you dropping by again, Vento. Sheesh, it's weird to not call you Buggie. I'm glad to see that I've improved from UT, considering that it's been quite ...

Thanks for the review! :D Somewhat expected you like Cain more than Abel. He's the more likable of the two, that's for sure. There aren't a lot of countries because ...

Haha, I'm definitely changing that first line now. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Looking back on it, yeah, the opening's pretty awkward. I'll make sure to change it.

When? Haha... Erm, that'll be once I get my stuff together and pull all the characters back to their original personalities. I'm currently working on another plot bunny, so that ...

Oh, good luck with college applications! I don't have to do them for another couple years :"D

Finally back. And, yeah, my writing class is at eight in the evening...? Is that really late in your terms?

Wow, I sort of left this site temporarily. Sorry I wasn't able to reply earlier! I'm glad you like Lucius's commentary. I always have fun coming up with his perspective. ...

Oh jeez, sorry for this two-day late reply. Thanks for your review, and I'll definitely clean this up now that I no longer have to update it every week. (I've ...