EnchantressMuffin

Now, to commence with my crit: Christian Parker was a senior. He was tall and had dark black hair. He was somewhat muscular and always had a smile. He was ...

Whoa, that sounds pretty awesome. To the bookstore! And yes, I really did wonder what the JC stood for. I thought it was Juggling Club when I first saw it... ...

Okay... That sounds majorly hilarious. Just the title's enough to make me go, "*double take" Whoa! " :D Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin

Oh, yeah, I've heard of these! They're advertised in the back pages of some books I have... can't remember which they are, though. One question: I was never really clear ...

This sounds like a sweet book. Of course, the only reason I opened this in the window was because it had the same title as the Beatles song... :D But ...

That's good. :) Those kinds of books are so great to discover. You never get tired of them! Have you ever read Avalon High? My friend says that's a really ...

This was pretty good... the biggest problem I could find was that you used the word "mourning" way too much. It would have been okay if the poem was longer, ...

This was really... well... I don't know what it was, but whatever it is there's a lot of it. Point-by-point time! - Take it out of either the bold or ...

This was really sweet. I liked it a lot. The first, oh, half of the poem wasn't that great, but it really picked up in the middle and I really ...

This was okay. It was a little bit slide-over-the-eyes, and I had trouble deciding if I liked it or not. On the technical side of thing, I don't think you ...

I liked the beginning oof this, but after that it fizzled a little bit. There were some definite parallels to the Weasleys in the Moderatz family, yes. I mean, twins, ...

Well, this was... hm... dark. Probably not a thing to show to your dad. ;) I'm not sure how much I liked it - I'm not much for the let's-all-murder-a-bunch-of-people-with-an-ancient-weapon ...

*echoes Lindsay* I really don't know what to say. This is really good, and really sweet, and really touching. I like this a lot... and there's nothing derogatory to say ...

I'm terrible at lyric critiquing, but I'll give it a shot. I liked this, overall, and it seemed very tuneful (is that even a word? If so, it's really badly ...

I've never read the book, or heard of it, for that matter, but I know that the title sounded like one of those lame Phyllis Reynolds Naylor books with that ...