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Re: drunk on the stars
Hello Persy, I have to say I liked this poem. There wasn't a particular aspect of it that was better than everything else. It was all amazing, honestly. I did ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The night I died
Hello Twinkle4ever, This was a really creepy, gory story that was really intriguing and full of description. At the start I definitely didn't expect it to turn out like that ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Lullaby for A Stormy Night
Hello sabrinadele, I felt like this was something I could relate to because of the truth and meaning behind your words and I felt it didn't lack any of the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Personality
Hello AnAmericanTeenager, I liked this, actually I liked it a lot. I liked the general kind of feeling about this and the way it told so much in just a ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts
Hello chasingstars, This was a really good poem and I was amazed at the complexity and compelling power to read further into this poem. I loved the beauty of this ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Wilted and Lonely Things
Hello talkingbird, Well here I am again, I'm back to give you another review! I can honestly say that I liked this much, much better than the other poem I ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Heart of Moon
Hello BrooklynWriter, a facebook quiz was actually accurate?? Wow, they usually are completely off the mark! :) I laughed straight away when I saw Noelle's comment. I agree most Facebook ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Cease To Exist
Hello TheCrimsonQuill, I thought this was a really powerful poem that captured the emotion and I love how you expressed so many different feelings into one. Like Daisuki mentioned, this ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Paint Yourself Over
Hello talkingbird, Personally I thought this was a quite simplistic, but it required more care when presenting it and you said it yourself. I feel like it's kind of awkward ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Stress
Hello paperbackheart, At first when I saw this I was thought it was going to be really long and I read what I thought was the very beginning of the ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Banana Bread Pudding
Hello Lava, The imagery in this is really good in this and you have turned quite a plain thing into a really descriptive interesting poem that is really enjoyable for ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: By the Road
Hello Fran94, At first I wasn't sure if I liked this poem but then after rereading it several times I began to fall in love with pure simplicity of it. ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Fairies
Hello Skittles, This was really good and you used imagery as a language feature very effectively. I personally think this was a really good poem that told the story really ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Give pain, then take it again.
Hello HHemayed, I like the feel of this poem, it was thoughtfully written and you can tell how it is meant to make the reader feel. It was really angry ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Sorting Hat
Hello espeon, Personally I thought this was really fantastic and very true to the Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling. I could tell immediately without having to read the title ...
Jul 24, 2011
