EmptySoul

Thanks for the review. :) I actually meant that in a sense like "I don't care if you're white like a dove".

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you for the review. :) I'm a complete newbie in poetry, so your tips will help me greatly when I write my future poems.

Thank you so much for the review :)

I'm sorry, but I don't understand how this "review" is actually reviewing my work.

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Hi there, Empty Soul is here to review! I don't quite understand what you were writing. It seemed like a poorly structured poem at some parts and a short story ...

Thanks for your review! :)

Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review! :)

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for your review! I'll make sure to check out everything you mentioned!

Thank you for your honesty. I'll try to make it more realistic.

Thanks for the review! :)

Thank you for your praise. I'll definitely PM you when the randy chapter is out. ~EmptySoul