Emorykings

beautiful i must confess, i enjoyed most of the poem that there really isnt much to say. but i'd like to say that this stanza "Breezes of tempetous air Vised ...

iove your poem your use of words, the deep feelings i felt as i read through the poem it was classy. But am never really a fan of lenghty poem ...

hey it was lovely i enjoyed reading this poem your rythm of tamps and damp was inspiring. But I would love to know cause am not too sure of what ...

hey dear dont be sorry to anyone its your poem and if you say its great its great. we are only here to say what we think about it. and ...

if I say I did not enjoy this poem I will only be lying to myself it was beautiful and something I think every members of YWS can relate seeing ...

seriously I can say I enjoyed it as a poem, the title in the first place is not attractive and am not sure potrays the whole theme of the poem. ...

I love your poem, I really do, but there is something I will like to point out. When writing a poem it should either be past or present, but what ...

I think it was great what you did with you poem I enjoyed reading it. whatn i wasnt sure about was the title you call it "thinprettysmartstrong---lost" but in your ...

For someone who does not know much about poem I will say you tried. the way you used your words brief and bright. when writing a poem you have to ...

not much to say because much wasn't written. but i did enjoy what I read. only that I dont think that it should be "IN" in this line "The air ...

actually as you said i would need an explanation to understand what you really meant but dont you think it will be more of a poem if I dont have ...

***clapping*** That was a lovely piece of poetry it was beautiful I enjoyed reading it especially your use of imagery, I have been working on a piece of after effects ...

The first three line was cool except for the period that followed after each To start. The next two lines that followed contained unecessary words like "letters and word" and ...

Here are you grammatical errors they are CAPITALIZE Firstly to start with there is no puntuations even when needed. I am sitting on THE BUS (the expression is not specific ...

unless the "doll" is refering to two different personallity you first two stanza "The baby doll sleeps until he picks her up and she dances with his feet and kisses ...