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Your poem is very mature and you've retold your difficulties in a totally unique way. I reaaally like this; I only wish that I could write this good :D Yes, ...

I like this :D So long as you have an awesome tune to go with it! If this were an ordinary poem, I'd say to crop up the ends a ...

Hey, wow :D This is really good! I love the style, the structure, and the subject (yes... please, don't ask) :D All'st I would suggest is making it a bit ...

The title is so pretty :) And the poem is, too! All I'd suggest is working on that structure. It's not really very... poem'y at the moment. :) But the ...

No, I really liked this too! (I guess your poem's just like Marmite) :) Sometimes it's good for a poem to not have a particular story-line - or any meaning ...

You're a real' good writer! :D There's a lot of imagery here - and I think that the descriptions you've used are exactly my kind of thing. Just perfect. Perfect ...

That was really... Good! :') I'm guessing that a lot of it was supposed to be left for the reader to figure out, right? :) I really, really liked reading ...

I'm kind of shamefully fussy with books :) If I'm not sucked into the story straight away, or if it's written in any way that I'm not comfortable with, then ...

I don't think I've ever read anything like this before :) I'm always looking for stories like this but can never find them! I wish I could write like this, ...

Oooh this is good :D I can't even see one cliche thing in here, and I really hate cliche'! I can't really think of anything else to say - you're ...

I very much liked this :) The structure - I like The rhythm - I'm not so sure about that... It's best to say poems over and over in your ...

I love the topic idea; it's very insirational - and imaginative. I love your use of description too :D The sentences you used sound real' mature :D I have a ...

This is real' good! Real' interesting... I very much like the way that this tells a story as well as being a poem; because most poems in my experience just ...

I like this :D And it's in a good format; like, it's written in an older-fashioned way which obviously definately suits the theme :) The only thing I would suggest ...

Are you an Evanescence fan? ;) I really liked reading this; mainly because suicide and darkness really... um... interests me? :O Naahh, I just really liked this. I can't really ...