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You're right. Being abused even once is such a horrible thing - and the younger you are, the more it hurts and the more it lingers with you. It's not ...

This is very very good :D I like it because it explains a lot and because you use good imagery, butttt - I have problems with the structure. Sorry... :) ...

This is really, really good :) I love how some of the sentences end so abruptly; unexpectedly. And I like the length, too :D Perfect length. Not too long. Not ...

That was awesome :D I mean it! I think that you could have, however, improved the ending. I know that the idea was basically for the reader to make up ...

I think that this is awesome - I just love it and there's nothing wrong with it. And anyway, this kind of repetition would look great in a song! Can ...

This may sound so strange, but that's one subject that I find really interesting to read about... Psychopathic children. o_O I just wrote something like this but it... it's not ...

This is a pretty awesome poem. I like the the repetition of ' drip, drip, drip' and the short, choppy words that you've used, but as you use these words ...

Hiiii :D I'd like to say that the title really works - it expresses 'depression' excellently :) And I was drawn to this because I love Evanescence and I recognised ...

Hey dude :D I love the way that this actually tells the reader about 'dying a virgin', rather than simply describing it and describing what they're going through... I guess ...

Hey, these short sentences are groovy :D I do declare that these poems should be more popular as I love poems like this - and it looks like you've got ...

Hey - I'm in a bit of a hurry right now, but I'd just like you to know how truly inspiring this is :D I've got so many ideas right ...

Hey! :D This topic is the kind that is actually very close to home with me. Firstly, I love the fact that you never actually mention the topic at all ...

Wow :D What struck me most here is the pace with which you've written. And it still works and flows excellently :) This kind of creative writing usually gets me ...

'Know what this reminds me of? The Blood Brothers. We're currently studying it in my drama class and... this sure does remind me of that. I hear my mommy and ...

This is very straightforward; but sometimes, it's good to have a straightforward poem fluttering around. All of these complicated ones get all samey and boring xD! This one speaks straight ...