EmmaJane

Hi Spitfire! Thanks for the PM! Well, on to the review. “No . ” (: Full-stop missed. What started as a gem for a ring became as big as a ...

Hi Lavender! Whoa! Perhaps before posting next time, you could set the layout to 'story'. This looks like a solid wall of text - not at all appealing. But don't ...

I softly kissed him softly. I don't know why, but it just sounds less awkward this way around. His lips pressed back against mine and I could just feel the ...

Hiya DD! Sorry it's been a while - I've had a hectic week. (: Anyway, you have certainly delivered in this chapter! Can't wait for the next! ;D ..And I ...

Hiya! Another great chapter. (: Loved the whole shirtless scene, and that one between her and Nicolas. Lovely. Well, on to the review! He looked as though he was mocking ...

Hey DD! Thanks for the PM! I would have missed this otherwise. I wouldn't worry too much about the description. It will improve, definitely. I just looked over a bunch ...

Hiya! Welcome to YWS! This is a wonderful site to improve your writing and I hope you enjoy it on here. :smt003 This has plenty of potential, but to really ...

Surely he's over Rosaline? ;) I thought the ending was done very, very well. I wasn't expecting the twist at all, as I figured you were just puppeting Shakespeare’s characters. ...

Hi! I saw your chapter ten ages ago, read a little bit through then realised it was actually amazing, so I went to the beginning. Blooming brilliant. I've loved every ...

Wow, magicwithin, that was great. But I spotted a problem or two: I've anticipated your arrival, fantasized over the precise point of our first embrace, forming various understated conclusions of ...

Where did you stop reading? I didn't. I read it all. Stopping was an unbearable thought. C: Even if you had posted loads of chapters I doubt I would have ...

Hey noheroes! Can I call you that for short? Welcome to YWS! This is a wonderful site, filled with people always eager to help and develop your writing skills. I'm ...

Hi Nativecatcher! I just read your unedited version before spotting this one, and I have to say, I preferred your simple "Thursday was when it first happened" to the new ...

KJ! You have something new here, I see. Well, I did enjoy it. Although I spotted: Yet another reason to mourn Father’s violet passing Violent? It always annoys me when ...

Hi Kate! Thanks for the PM, I wouldn't have caught this otherwise. C: And once again I did enjoy it. :D Anyways, on to the review! My foot inched downward ...