Emma

Okay, sorry. Maybe some of it IS hard to understand. And anyway I was only joking around. Thats just my style of writing. Oh well thanx for reading it!

Wow! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG. I didnt get it...

Awwww thats so sad! I I didnt really expect that! Why didnt you save the baby!!!!!! Save the BABY!! THE BABY HAS RIGHTS!!! That was really good. (BABY) I can ...

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Okay, so you know in those mushy films when a girl sees this handsome guy and there is mushy music in the background and his hair is like flying and ...

Look: Lisa's room was spotless (apart from the dust) compared to the rest of the house. See? I really think you should really read my story properly before you write ...

OKay sorry, Im the one in the crap mood. Thank you for ur reply. I will use this constructive crit and turn it into compliments for my next work! Sorry ...

They are like posh kids. I cant be arsed writing long plays. And I didnt know people could be arsed to actullay read the blooming thing. So thanks. Am I ...

Thanx. Oh yer and Callum was only acting to be nice. Maybe I SHOULD of added more detail. And I know someone who doesnt keep their self clean but they ...

Heehee. I told you to do it! Mawahaha! I am kool!

Hey that was good! Its better than mine!! Keep it up and use the constructive critz. Thats how my artwork and storywriting is improving.

Hey thanx, but my work is no way NEAR as good as yours. Im glad you liked it Im normally rubbish at poems.

I like it. Keep it up.

HaHa That is such a good lyric! I actully made a kool tune for it! Though u'll have ur own... Great! I liked that! 'Have an asthma attach! Hahahahahaha!