Emma

Hmmmmm, no! :D I have something really good, if I have enough comments on it. I really need people to tell me the truth so I will KNOW what to ...

lol see what I mean?! :P Im kidding btw

Okay Hunter..... Its a good story, you have talent. At least you didn't ruin it with your 'funny' humor. Good work!

It is really good, there is alot of description, keep it up!

Its good so far, man you have a better use of words than me! And your younger! I really need to start learning in English....

Its good, but short, I would of loved to hear more of it, keep it up! PLEASE! Oh, and tell us what happens next!

erh... wow! I'd like to read more of this!

Yer! Meanie! *cries more* you made a girl cry! O.O

Its your fault TBR that my scary mary story got deleted and it wont come back! *cries*

Its great, sorry I took my time to comment. It just gets better and better!

Aaaaah I get it now! :wink:

Good but one thing.... YOU ALREADY SENT IT, DELETE IT NOW! A WASTE OF SPACE IF IT IS ALREADY UP THERE. Sorry, but I dont like it when they take ...

It was freaky and confusing, but the descprition kept me there. Good job.

Wow, well people have thier own styles of writing and reading. Anyway I didn't find it boring and got alot of people into it, maybe you weren't that kind of ...

Well... I thought it was very good. As I am rubbish with spelling I asked Harley to help me, so if you see any large words, Harley slidded them in! ...