Emma

hee thats the whole point. Yer I know, yuck sorry about that. You are funny! You like wearing girls stuff! Please give me ideas! :D

Here is some more, this one is bloody so be careful young ones.... Please comment! And if you have any ideas on how to make it more funny then PLEASE ...

Its nice but something is missing... Its too short and I would of loved it to be longer. I think its good though why so short?!

Thank you lolli, I keep on getting mixed up, unsure if the comma goes before or after the speech marks.

Awww that was so sad! (is crying) Tell me she comes back! It was very well written and I must see the next bit as soon as you can!

No more comments? I would really like it though, I am all alone and I dont want to start asking lots of folk who proberly doesn't want to read it ...

Thats really sweet! I like it!

Thats because your work is good, everyone is just jealous, that's why they aren't commenting. :D

Yey nice story, and I think i know where you got the plot from! :wink:

Thankyou for that Brad, though I need to look in the dictionary for some of the words you said! I'm not angry of what you said (You need to hear ...

Tis good though I have NO idea what so ever about what is going on. Apart from that they were in a fire... Where's their parents?!

It is very good though it didn't really suit me, if you know what I mean. Though I will still read the next part.

Nice! Just send it here so me can read! :D

Thankyou, I'm glad that you have gave your honest opinion and have gave me ways to sort it out. As I am not really good with stories I will use ...

Hee, thanks. And dusty, I see what you mean. I told you Im rubbish! If I do try I will try to put in my description, Im kinda new to ...