Emma

Wow... The last one I read, he was going to kiss someone... Now he's somewhere else... With blood... :shock: Wow... I need to keep up with the time.

What the Hell Ryan? There was no need to bag Reichieru like that you loser! I haven't been here for long, but I know that this site is about writing ...

Wow, it was very good. I think people at the age of eight or younger would like this sort of stuff. And like other people say you would be a ...

Wow, its good. I can't really say much because I'm so rubbish at doing these sort of things. So I'm no use to you, but apart from that, its pretty ...

I think you need to describe everything a lot more than what you have. Nice work anyway, try reading more books, it helps :D And if you're planning on writing ...

Nice, I could read it without getting bored and wanting to read something else. Nice work. :D I wish I could help you more, but I can't because I ain't ...

Wow that was really good.. Sorry if I missed some of your other posts I kinda forget about the Literary Forums. And where on earth are all the other people ...

:shock: No, really, you wrote this? It is amazing, I feel for the woman and the man. I really want to read more of your stories, its just so amazing. ...

lol The ending.. Hmm Im not sure on it either.. I love the rest though! such feeling put into it! :D Omg.. I'll shut up now.. -mutters into self- YOU ...

I was going home from school, I cant remember how old I was, and my mum was waiting on me, which was unusual, she grabbed my hand and started dragging ...

Hey! That is so good! Yeah, a stereotypical story, mega cute guy and pretty popular girl. But the descriptions where great and I can see that going well! Also.. Yeah! ...

Its good :D All romantic!! :P I have always wanted to see a sunset but never had the chance..

Wow this is a moving piece.. The only thing I dont like is where you put: 1million.. It kinda puts me off like you cant bebothered to write it properly... ...

lol true... :D And Harley.. Wait you dont even care about my comments... Its really good! Everyones just jealous :P

Reichieru you are so very honest! :D For the way you told it Sam, was excellent. If you want to get to understand it better, try reading the rest of ...