I like it, but I would say the same as Reichieru; I knew the 'tis's were intentional but I didn't like it. Well, I sort of liked it but not really. But it is still very good. Write more!
i thought it was very good. a little confusiong, but good...are you sure you're 11?
fairy ;-P
I like it, but I would say the same as Reichieru; I knew the 'tis's were intentional but I didn't like it. Well, I sort of liked it but not really. But it is still very good. Write more!
Reichieru you are so very honest! 
For the way you told it Sam, was excellent.
If you want to get to understand it better, try reading the rest of her story. Its really good Sam! I love it! Damn you for being better than me!
*cough* intentional *cough cough*
Lol. If it's really that bad, just tell me and I'll fix it.
(personally, I like it, but I am biased)
I do. 
I have the Continental army down and pat (coz they're easy, they didn't wear uniforms or decoration or anything) but this story has essentially nothing to do with them. Ho hum.
‘Tis one of the soldiers, a colonel, by the look of the decoration on him. On his flat-ironed coat there are many rows of shining medals and colorful ribbons, and his hat is nearly brimming with them as well.
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