EmilyofREL

I may review with depth later, but for now I'll let the tears in my eyes and the heaviness in my chest speak for themselves. I also lost a sister...seven ...

Thank you so much for such a detailed and positive review Arc :) You're right about the texts...I was trying to show Austin being a bit...dumb? dull? and ended up ...

Thank you Hopkin! I'm flattered! This review gave me the push I needed to finish part 2. :) So thanks for that! (And Happy Easter!)

Have I mentioned I love you lately? This poem's so emotional (probably because I know most of the story behind it)

You could break it up a little more. But for the most part, it's fantastic. Love it. Love you.

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Thank you for such a great review! To be honest, Anna and Ryan are alive to me too. I love them. I think about them. I know little intimate real ...

Dang it I replied to that comment instead of reviewing! Technologically challenged here...sorry XP

For the most part this is amazing! I was going to point out the capitalization of lord, but I see you already responded to that. Personally, I'd capitalize Lord. It ...

Interesting idea...cute and funny. I hate math but this is sweet :) Good work!

Thank you Bianca! This story has sadly been put on the shelf for over a year now and it is slowly being revised to split up into an Anna/Ryan story ...

Thank you! This is only the first third or so of the story...probably closer to a quarter. I'm excited to keep going!

Oops, didn't mean to post that as a reply!

Poetry is not my thing, so I apologize if this isn't helpful :P That said, I agree with the lack of meter. I,personally, like short lines. I think they can ...