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Re: Purging Land
Hi there! Wow, I think this poem is fantastic! First of all, it is beautifully written, but it is really smart too, the poem gets you thinking :) The poems ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: Trapped Inside
Hi! :) Wow, I really, really, really like this poem. It is very well written, the wording of the poem is beautiful. I thought the flow was good, and I ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: Lost
Hey there :) I like this poem a lot. It is powerful with a clear message. Your rhyming is good, but honestly I think the wording of the poem suffered ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: A Place to Belong part 1
Hi! This is a very good beginning to an interesting story. Even though I don't really like Twilight, I think your idea is great, and I enjoyed reading it:) I ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Highborn Jouney part 2
Hi! This is a very nice story, it's a really good idea. Cathleen is a very interesting character, but I would like to get more inside her head, I would ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Apathetic Motives
Wow. I really like this poem. You really described this "feeling of nothing" very well, and the poem is very relatable, I could really identify with it. I think the ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Identical: Chapter One - Reminiscing
Wow, this short story is so good. I really like it :) The language is fantastic, especially the three last lines. I couldn't stop reading :) I am a big ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: Love Never Changes
I thought this short story was very good! It was well-written, and I really like the plot :) I didn't quite understand the point in her describing him as a ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: The White Canvas
Hi :) I really like this! I just want to share my interpretation of it: When you're young you have a lot of expectations of what life is going to ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: The Moon Spirit Chapter One
Wow, i really liked this. Very mysterious, can't wait to find out what's happening next. You have a few grammar mistakes: " By this time the the sky ... " ...
Jun 24, 2013
