EmiAnne

Hey! So... I loved your story! You kept the girl real and that made it really believable, i guess. I wanted to live. I wanted to live get rid of ...

Love the story I wished I knew where she went, and who it was she had left in her place. that sentence confused me. Who's she? Who left who in ...

super good... i just love your story. Only thing is, i don't see much action coming from this... i'd love to see where you go with it. PM me when ...

Your poem is so beautiful and to the point- no fluff, you get to the heart of it all. It sounds perfect, for this story. Can't wait to read more ...

I love your story- the first line pulled me in, the last line kept me in. But between that, there's just a few things left- I sighed. “How long has ...

That was a really good poem. Born a child of Democracy, raised in harsh hypocrisy. We learned in school to read and write and lie, to never kiss and tell. ...

Hola!! I loved your story- everything flows perfectly from one peice to the next, and it's not an overly-confusing plot-line. but, when you have Gary then Belle thinking, right after ...

Your story was so good!! I liked the details, and your story, even if long, was flowing and compelling and i couldn't stop writing it. If the story takes place ...

I love love love your story. The two stories flow together very nicely and the characters were compelling and interesting. You may want to explain how Renee got involved with ...

Really cool story. I liked the descriptions you put in, like twining my fingers around your golden hair, and i loved the beginning where you said, the feeling of a ...

I really like this part as the plot flows between the six parts very smoothly. [quote]Sam Mathews.”/quote] The Mathews is spelled Matthews in an earlier section, but that is a ...