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Thanks for pointing out the spelling :-) I did read over it a few times, I'm just really bad at spelling. Thanks for all the positive feed back blackdove! You ...

Sam. I love you. But I'm sure you already knew this. Yes, one of the largest things I've noticed: I have no action. It's horrible. Stuff starts happening eventually, but ...

(Note that bold and free doesn't necessarily mean taboo. XD) I'm sure that is something you would tell only me, and no one else? -_- Some reputation I have been ...

Ahhhh Darling, you don't really need to do line by line for me! (And I'd perfer you not to! I'm lazy! What a surprise?) but thank you anyway :-D Maybe ...

Kit, you are too overwhelmingly smart for me :-) Now I know what it really is, Danka!

I didn't read it. Sorry. But just looking at it: there is no reason to use ellipses (...) so much.

oen week one I love flashbacks. And I love you. And this feels like LOST, lol. But still, yay!

and only a three folders typo? I feel like I'm reading LOST, only it gives me a headache... I'm starting to realize just how much I have to think about.

Finally edited Chapter Four. I also finally wrote chapter five, too :-D I'm hoping readers like it. The ending was chanted in the last edit of it, from one paragraph, ...

Maybe haiku humor is something I just don't get, because I grinned at it -I know several people with dreadlocks- but I didn't actually laugh out loud. I didn't expect ...

Yeah, the lack of author names was because it was by the aforementioned author, and the page numbers missing were for web sites. It was rather short, but it was ...

Heh, thanks! Though, I consider this one of my worst poems. Go find something better of mine to read! Thanks anyhow.

I have read none of them XD Does that mean something is wrong with me? I hope not.

I'm surprised at the way I continually end up getting critiques on this, one way or another, even though I posted it two months or so ago... It must be ...

Thanks! Finally, a comment on it :-D Yeah, my conclusion was crumby. I was trying to get 5 pages, and I did, so I was happy. Not sure what I ...