Emerson

Thanks for all the comments and complaints! It took me forever but I finally edited, both minor and major. The only thing (that I know of) that got ignored in ...

This is a really neat idea, but you did a whole lot of telling about the past. Why not show us some of those scenes? You also did a mini ...

This was interesting, but I think the details could have been done better. You over explained the darkness (we know what dark is) and you could give more attention to ...

Nice ^_^ Found some typos here and there. I like the conflict you set up for her to decide. It really pulls back away from, "Is she safe now?" because ...

This was good, and exciting, but the action was confusing at times and you missed words, and had typos. I suggest reading over it to clean up all the confusion. ...

Erm. I have this book. (I stole it from my English teacher xD) She said it's suppose to be one of the best books ever. I started it and then ...

Ah... Moving this to lyrics, it seems.

er... I'm moving this to random. Even if it does have to do with art, this isn't for advertising.

DAMN RIGHT! he died, I'm excited. And, wtf, was he having sex with Kyle? ewwwwwy. Haaser is just so...odd. And I'm so dang happy he died. I'm sad I'm catching ...

Oh...wow. I really loved this flash back. It explains a lot about kyle, and why he acts like he does with Jon *cry* and why they can never be together, ...

This flash back was depressing.... I love how you randomly give us flashbacks, that are meaningful to the relationship and remind us that this story isn't just zombies and conspiracy ...

I liked the camera's violent scenes...lol I'm deeply wondering how this will eventually all wrap together.

I love the French mythology you are adding in. I'd love it if you told me more on it. And those men? Creepy as ever! True end-of-the-world men for you... ...

*squeal* goodness, as always. Kyle sneered at him. “Your tie is fugly.” el oh el. times a billion even.

Very creepy. This is one of the chapters where the action confuses me and I can't follow this point, I blame myself and not you. I get confused easily. I'm ...