Emerson

Hey there! Sorry it took me a bit to get around to your review, but I'm here now! I have two major things I'd like discuss: the actually writing and ...

Hey there! Sorry it took me such a long time to get to this, I usually let my reviews build up and then I attack five or so at once. ...

Heylo there! So I am here to eat up your story. :D I'm sorry if I have a lot of comments but I felt like I should do a good ...

Hey there! sorry it took me a bit to get around to giving you this review, I've been busy with quite a lot of other things, but here it is ...

Hey there! Finally here for the review you requested. :) This was an interesting read, and the ending is certainly... a cliff hanger? But I do have some issues with ...

Hey there! sorry it took me a bit to get around to this, I've been off doing other things! But I am here at last. I loved this section almost ...

Hello there! So I'm finally here for your review, like you requested. :) Sorry it took a bit! First I'd like to say that I really love the meaning behind ...

Hello there! Okay, well. That was HILARIOUS! I thought it was so funny that I don't care that it wasn't exactly a story. I'm honestly not sure how you could ...

Aw, this is cute! to his deck of deceitful cards

Hello there! Sorry it took me a bit to get around to this. I hope my review is still valuable to you. ^^ “Darling,” his cracked lips slit open, begging ...

So this was for Jen's Epic contest? (read that above, hadn't caught onto it) I guess that explains some of the odd interjections. Anyway, I'm not entirely sure how to ...

Hey there! I'm here for your review :] I would first like to comment on your use of rhyming. Cut it out. Yup. Stop it! Rhyming ultimately hinders you from ...

Sooo I'm here with your view! but it looks like I missed the crowd o.o and I have to admit I'm also one of those people who thought this was ...

I agree that I didn't like the first paragraph, more so because I think you should place it somewhere else (or cut it altogether since bringing up the reference of ...

So I didn't read the whole thing but I did get fairly far - stopped around the point where Jared mentioned the father's "waling problem". I had intended on finishing ...