Emerson

Hello! You should feel incredebly lucky. I never review SciFi! But, somehow, I am here! The black void of space was anything but. Dozens of small, metallic spacecraft swarmed around ...

Hello! First I would like to welcome you to YWS. If you have any questions or need help finding something on the site please feel free to ask me! I ...

I'm back for more. ^_^ I'm glad to see that my review will only be the second! And not, this time, the tenth, haha. Your beginning here I didn't like ...

Then I turned and reached out, she handed me the bag of supplies first. This is phrased weird. You do this several other times, but you seem to split sentences ...

Hello! It took me a while to find this, it seems the link you gave in my boutique was wrong? But in any case here I am, with broom et ...

I just want you to understand me before you examine me. Being that you are not your poetry, I am not understanding nor examining you. I'm critiquing your poetry. There ...

Windshield wipers flashed across the woodland landscape in a hypnotic dance The repetition of "land' annoys me. I think you could get away with "the woodlands in a..." I have ...

Hello again! run my nail under the nail , allow the paper to fall into my hands. Er, as you can see, you repeat "the nail". I wasn't sure what ...

Eimear already kicked you about reviewing. ^_^ Please do so? I have not one name, but thousands. I am the screams beneath the moans, I am your family’s broken bones, ...

Would you [s]except[/s] accept me for who I am? Way too many rhetorical questions. Not to mention you are writing this poem for someone else and not your readers. Poetry ...

Hello! I know, it took me forever to get to this. You'll really have to forgive me. I take a long time on fiction critiques, and I've been busy. Just ...

Hello! First I would like to welcome you to YWS. If you have any questions about the site or need help finding something feel free to PM me. I just ...

I thought I would spread some love. Or criticism? [s]As[/s] I watched you [remove comma] As you watched them[period] I thought of the bare [I don't like the line break ...

Hello! First off, a Moderator's Note . Your first name and last was in the post, and it is incredebly unsafe to post either of those on the internet. I ...

Oh, this is too cute. My largest problem is with your meter and some of your line lengths. With poems like these, not only are they dependent on a rhyme ...