Emerson

I think the biggest bump this poem has is I have to know what calypso is all about in order to really understand the poem... So from there, I Can ...

This poem has such a good feel to it. I love the way it's casually written. That's something I think many people wonder about, fight with, and come to accept... ...

Hey there! My perennial silhouette blackens my dark cold heart, cools my icy flesh, steals all my warmth, my grace it takes, So I chose this verse here because I ...

ooo lesbians. I love lesbians! I think this is a pretty good story for a starter. It could have some dusting up here and there. During the fight between the ...

Howdy hi This is a very short piece. It's a nice memory, but I'm not sure it's a story. It's lacking a lot of stuff that is real essential to ...

This is adorable. Not too much to say on it though, really. I think it might be more fanfiction that actual fiction, since the Peter Pan stories aren't your own... ...

This was quite a joy to read. While I'm a bit, ah, pretentious maybe, I still enjoyed it. I tend to feel fussy when I read something that doesn't have ...

This is an adorable little story. :) Grats on it being your first post! I think this could use some beefing up, though. It needs meat! While you have a ...

oh jeez... that's a great ending. :P This is a pretty little funny thing. I think you could certainly expand it into more than it is. Right now the writing ...

Hi again! Back like I promised. It is so hard to remember that he isn’t right next to him me . glanced outside at the snowflakes falling like rocks. I ...

Hey there! Here to deliver you a yummy review. He would just grimace like a child at it would make me laugh. Typo in there! Should be two sentences or ...

Hey there you face. I like this. There is so much beautiful imagery crammed full into this thing, it's almost hard to read it once through and catch it all. ...

That spoiler is completely not a spoiler. Ayhew. I was very excited to see you had posted something so of course I had to read it! Vance is significantly not ...

I completely agree with Isha on backing up what you have to say! I think this was a really good first draft of a poem. Try to condense it though. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. My first impression on this poem, since it's something I'm a bit OCD for, is that the grammar and punctuation are a bit... off. Take ...