Emerson

Hello, hello! Who knew so famous a show , with so expensive a little merchandise, would be so hard to find? Do you mean movie, or book? In your second ...

I have to say, honestly, that I don't understand this at all. Alright, that isn't entirely true. I understand the theme, I believe at least. The darkness in ourselves? well, ...

Well, since Kiss covered a lot of the mechanics and so forth of the poem, I guess I'll take what I can get! I agree that your first two lines ...

Hello Emmy! Ready and waiting to save you I have to say I really thought the ending would tie in to dancing! And when it didn't, I was a little ...

Hello Angel! First of all, I have to say that adding polls to your writing is kind of annoying, although I can see why you did. ^_~ Next time, though, ...

the crystal clear rain I could do without "crystal clear" because really, rain isn't. "Aj!" He yelled smiling when he saw her window slowly opening from the second story. Aj ...

Good evening dear poet! ^^ Like a sunken ship The sides all sunken in Like lilchoma, I don't like the repetition of sunken. I'm not sure how you can fix ...

I edited your post to fix the italics because I love you that much . The new formats of stories makes it so that you have to do a new ...

Hullo! 12 months earlier... I think you can cut this, it will flow just fine without it! We'll get the idea. However, she always knew how to make me feel ...

Hey there! and the voice not in the[?] right tone This is a very dark and morbid poem, I have to say. At least, the ending is. I'm not sure ...

I placed them where I did as poetic devices. I wanted the poem to have a kind of pensive aura about it. I'm not sure where you get the idea ...

Hullo there! First off, lay off the ellipses! Those are the .... things in case you don't know. Despite what you might think, they don't add to your poem at ...

Hello! First before I review - and this really has nothing to do with anything - I adore your avatar. The air [s]is[/s] in the room is suffocating. Warm as ...

will you go [s]threw[/s] everything with me through I have to say, this is more of a grocery list of what you want from someone than an actual poem. Why ...

Hello there! Now, a few words that I have a prologues... I'm not big on them? And I'll explain why. They're sort of useless, if you think about it. What ...