Emerson

Hey there Swagg! That's a pretty neat username, by the way. Welcome to the site, I see you're new. :) Why don't you introduce yourself in the Welcome Mat ? ...

I am going to try to stick with what I know, that way it's easier for me to use. That's a good idea. ;-) I know Snoink likes math, but ...

Hey there! I see your a brand new member to YWS :) Nice to meet you! I'm Suzanne, and I've got a lovely review for you. If you have any ...

Hullo there darling! I'm back for seconds ;-) Now, I did look out for typing errors because there were a handful and I felt I should let you know about ...

Major props to you on creepiness and bringing things around again. I liked that! Burning is lovely. However, there were some issues that made this hard to get to. The ...

Hey there! I'd like to say that I've read this poem three times now and I'm still not entirely sure what you're trying to say. ^^; I don't blame you ...

Hey there! so I'm here to deliver your review. :] THE BASICS: Grammar Ah, grammar. It's a struggle at first. ^^ Some of your sentences didn't make complete sense either ...

I have to say I sit with Hannah on this one; I didn't like it. I didn't hate it, or anything. These are one of those situations where I tend ...

I've read this twice so far and I'm probably going to read it a few more times before finishing up entirely. My largest complaint: I'm not entirely sure what you're ...

I meant to review this when I first saw it but at the time I just wasn't in the mood to write a review. So! Now I'm finally back to ...

Hey there! Sorry this took me so long to get to. I actually read over it a few days ago, and then I wasn't real sure what to say plus ...

Hey there! The biggest thing I can say about this poem is that, since you wrote it so long ago, you should have considered the fact that this isn't your ...

Hello there! So I absolutely love this because it's got all that kind of humor that The History of Tom Jones was filled with (even though I haven't finished that ...

Hey there Jas! (May I call you that?) Got a review for ya! As far as small edits, I found it real inconsistent that your character doesn't care about religion, ...

Hey there! Suzanne here with the review you requested! ^^ So I believe you wanted me to talk about flow and tone. Your flow isn't so bad, accept at the ...