EmBird

Review: I find it hard to review lyrics without hearing the tune of the song, it makes all the difference. Reading it, it seems pretty mainstream, but like I said ...

Review: I like the rhyming so definitely keep that. It's very spiritual, and fills the reader with a feeling of peace. Keep working on this, I think it could be ...

Review: I don't think you intended this to be a perfect poem, it's personal to who you are. But if you do decide to do a bit of editing and ...

Review: This was an interesting read, I was hooked from the beginning. As mentioned below, there were a few errors, such as 'smiling' instead of 'smelling'. With a bit of ...

Review: I found this a great read. I am such a fan of old English. The lay out was brilliant, especially the 'read, read, read'. Your method is brilliant, it ...

Review: This is so metaphorical, but anyone can relate to it, it has the ability to be interpreted in many ways and that is a powerful trait for a poem ...

Review: In terms of grammar, just capital letters and apostrophes need to be included. Was this intended as lyrics? As for the concept, its a great concept, there's a sadness, ...