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Wow! This was an amazing poem. I love what you do with shapes, and the way you present so many fragments that add up to something really big and meaningful. ...

Wow. This is amazing. I love the way you center around specific images, such as raining and burning, and use them to expand on your ideas. I think the connection ...

Wow! I love the way you play with the word “care”, and the phrase “I couldn’t care less”. It’s beautiful. You also have a very strong narrative voice. Your first ...

I love this! I love the way you play with format, and arrange the lines of your poem in different ways. I also love the way there’s so many topics ...

Wow! This was so sweet. I love the way Warren meets Marilyn. It’s so out of the ordinary, and yet so ordinary at the same time. It’s not how people ...

Hey! I just want to say, at first these poems reminded me of Frozen, with the whole idea of lies and ice. Just a random coincidence. I love the alliteration ...

This was an amazing poem! I love it. I love all the imagery, and the way in the opening stanza, you describe the soldier. I can really picture that in ...

Hey! I loved this story. There’s so much going on, and it’s really intense. There’s so much potential for action, conflict and intrigue. I love the way you set up ...

Holy Cow! I love this story (get it?). You have an interesting setup. There’s four adults living together (almost reminds me of Friends, in a weird way), which is sure ...

I love this piece! The title is particularly amazing; I love the imagery and meaning behind "rainbow blood". You do a good job walking the reader through the events of ...

Wow! This was amazing. I really love the narrative voice. It adds a mystical, otherworldly tone to the poem. I also love how you focus the poem on three specific ...

Wow. This was an amazing piece. I love the way you systematically go through eras of your mother’s life, building the idea of your mother in the reader’s mind. As ...

I love these poems! They're both quite beautiful. I love the alliteration in "Kites" of the "finless fishes... flutt'ring, flitt'ring". I also love the way you write fluttering; the absence ...

This was gorgeous. I love your use of imagery; it really helps create a vibrant tone. For example, where you describe “burnt Black bodies in town squares / and white ...

First off, I’d like to say I love the formatting on this piece. It’s amazing, and I can tell that it’s not just arbitrary. It really adds to the poem, ...