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Ok, thanks. I've edited, now. =]

Oof. I like it. I don't have anything that I really caught to critique about.. So yay! =]

Awww, this was rather depressing... I loved it. Hah!

That is ABSOLUTELY terrible. Haha, I could never critique anyone with that, without feeling guilty. You're an exception. Oooo, I'm such a rebel. xD

Oh, I absolutely adore this. I don't know.. it's just perfect. And it sounds great read aloud.

This was.. neat. No really, I liked it! It was funny. Creative. Yes.

I'm not a popular person at school. But I just counted the population of my book shelf.. About 170. Well, I feel popular! What an ego boost! No, I'm just ...

Keep writing. This was cool, and if you continue, I think your next ones could be fantastic.

This poem made a total insomniac like me sleepy. In a good way! It was very dreamy and original.. And humorous too.

Hmmm.. I do love me a good cliche! I'd like to meet this boy one day. Got his number? Haha, I liked it, though, yeah, it was a bit cliche. ...

Ahaha, I can totally relate to this. Which is always good. It made me laugh, especially the ending. Delightfully dark.

That is exactly how I'm feeling. I like it. But since Kenpachi Masamune beat me to it.. I have nothing to correct, being that I'm a chess nerd, I could ...

I know, haikus are about nature and seasons and what not. And there is another word for what I wrote.. But I can't remember. Someone enlighten me? *hitch hikes to ...

Ooo, I liked it. I smell a life lesson! Haha. No, please don't die! "I do believe in fairies, I do, I do!"

Oh my.. I love this. Anything that needs correcting has already been said, so I won't go through the trouble of telling you. I LOVED it. And now I can ...