ElizabethHuntsJoy

Sorry for the late thank you! I really appreciate your advice! :)

Thank you! :P

I really appreciate your feedback! The more critical the better! Thank you so much! I just wrote this in the span of three minutes so I wasn't necessarily considering logic. ...

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me! I probably should have been more specific that the door was cracked, but I had purposefully used the word "sealed" ...

I can't wait to see what this leads to! Just make sure you check capitalization errors, which in this case there are very few.

I also couldn't help but notice we're both thirteen! It's great to see other people my age interested in writing! Hope we get to talk more!

Thank you so much! I really just wrote this out of boredom with the intent of making it a chapter of something bigger, but I lost inspiration, causing the ending.

Well I think I'd rather be the hare.

Thank you for your advice! I'll definitely hold on to it! :D

It's great to meet you! Thank you so much for your review, and be sure to keep your advice and help in mind.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I really loved reading this. I hope to read more stuff by you!