Elizabeth

As always, I love it. Loved evreything you write. this was a beautiful piece (Note to self: Work on constructive crititism)

RYAN IS MY SOULMATE I mean.... Oh wow this was nice.... I can feel the bond between the girl and her dog... it's painfulll you oput me in tears GIMME ...

Mr Hagg does much more worse Crysi I'll try and post what you can imporove later although I see no need for that. -Lazy Lizzy

Yes you are. But that means you can read it but how can you read it if you are dead? :gasp: I am here so therfore it must mean that ...

Favor for a favor great job Sam... i am too tired to point out mistakes or nything but.. otherwise good.... MONKEYS!!!

DAMNIT that dowload I wanted only downloaded halfway.... Anyway ys I am having fun with this. Don't you like it as well?

thank you. it was very helpful actualy.... :searches chapter for more mistakes:

tense errors? What kinda of tense errors? HELP ME!!! i got you, i made the same diolaug mistake on another work

LOL I am finally into a story i can stick to... unless I mix up clues and then accidentally revial the identity of the killer.... Who do you think it ...

I didn't kill him! I loved him so much and it wasn't like he was rich :-P Naw... I loved him... he'll still be mentioneed please don't be mad... unless ...

RUIN?!?! FUNNY HUMOUR?!?!?! :gargles:

Ok I edited it as much as I could... thanks... otherwise was it good?

Ok if I can't wipe blood off then what can I do> I was using is as some sort of analogy or something.... so can you help me?

Oh wow you're good... ouch my heart it pangs... if I was Salene and my boyfriend was.... ooh... my eyes are wattery... great potential...

sam you are sick... And yes I will try and continute if ater I have finished with something else...