Elizabeth

You spelt graceful wrong. Anyway I liked it. It was simple and sweet and really something that I liked.... Nice Job.

If fate loves you why can't it let you get over it already. GAH!

I didn't read hers until AFTER MY GODDAMN POEM! wtf is everybody accusing me of copying them? GODDAMNIT FINE I'LL DEFINE DAMN MOON BOOTS!

DEFFINATELY REMINDS ME OF ROY ... LOVELY! It remids me so much about Roy. I love peoms I can relate to. EXELLENT!!

It doesn't want you to breath... Breathing is for the weak!

Hahaha Thank's alot. I wish the artroom, which is right over there *points left* woul dbe as pretty as I imagined here... Yay for hyperness!

FINALLY Somebody FINALLY reads this! Thank you Brian. ... Well, now you're Fry. Thank you Fry.

I couldn't think of anything else... hmm... thank you thouh! Gesus loves me... lol... Anyway I'll try and fix it... maybe a nice confusing and lovely metaphor or something.

Yes and they are quite cozy... Like living in a deflated tent...

*shrugs* It's happened...

Finally I get to reading this, I forgot if I commented or not. I really liked this, nice job on it... So pure.... so true... If you do fix it ...

I loved this. It was beautiful and I can picture the girl lying there... It was very beautifully written, Gosh I wish I had talent like that... nice job.

Little emo kid blah blah blah. Fine then Lucifer, I will work on it and I WILL BE HAPPY! THANK YOU FOR THE CRITIQUES WHY AM I YELLING?!!!

AHAHAHAHA ..... Seriously. Yeah... twas nice to read... just.... not dedicated to me :(

Hmm.... People... today... are always like this... I liked it... it was very honestly short and informative... I loved the last two lines... Now my wrists feel all tingly.... ooh...